Hi Ashley,
Your mark: C
You provide good images that match the plot development. Volume is satisfactory but sound effects are not used to enhance the storytelling. Tone and pace are not used effectively. The narration sounds mechanical and does not engage the audience. Grammar sometimes impedes meaning, detracting from the storytelling. The plot is somewhat developed and transitions are provided but there are gaps in the story development that cause the story to seem rushed.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Ashley,
Your mark: C
You provide good images that match the plot development. Volume is satisfactory but sound effects are not used to enhance the storytelling. Tone and pace are not used effectively. The narration sounds mechanical and does not engage the audience. Grammar sometimes impedes meaning, detracting from the storytelling. The plot is somewhat developed and transitions are provided but there are gaps in the story development that cause the story to seem rushed.
Ms. Hewitt