Hi Jodh
This is what I’ve done
Headline: Positive: It was bolded well, with big text, so it was really easy for me see the headline. It was a good headline telling me what it was about. Negative: Swoodies should have been capitalized, because it is a place, make sure to also use period. You could have used something like … “Why are there all these strange Swoodies shops appearing everywhere.
Images: I like how you used two pictures because it shows more about what’s happening. The pictures fit the article really well, because there is a picture of the store, and one of the super long lines. I just don’t think the description matches the second picture, because the picture is a long line and you talk about are people questioning it. You should have wrote about that somewhere else and said below something about the long lines.
Content: There is lot’s of information about what this is, it looks like a
ligitement news article. Almost everything about looks perfect, if I were to just look at that really quickly, I would think it would be a real news article. There’s nothing really to fix about the context.
Great job Jodh
Hi Jodh
This is what I’ve done
Headline: Positive: It was bolded well, with big text, so it was really easy for me see the headline. It was a good headline telling me what it was about. Negative: Swoodies should have been capitalized, because it is a place, make sure to also use period. You could have used something like … “Why are there all these strange Swoodies shops appearing everywhere.
Images: I like how you used two pictures because it shows more about what’s happening. The pictures fit the article really well, because there is a picture of the store, and one of the super long lines. I just don’t think the description matches the second picture, because the picture is a long line and you talk about are people questioning it. You should have wrote about that somewhere else and said below something about the long lines.
Content: There is lot’s of information about what this is, it looks like a
ligitement news article. Almost everything about looks perfect, if I were to just look at that really quickly, I would think it would be a real news article. There’s nothing really to fix about the context.
Great job Jodh