Hi Noon,
Your mark: B
Good choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume and sound effects are not used to enhance the engagement of the audience. Your pace is good but your tone is not engaging, at times, mechanical. Pronunciation and grammar are usually correct. Mistakes do not impede meaning. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical. Well done!
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Noon,
Your mark: B
Good choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume and sound effects are not used to enhance the engagement of the audience. Your pace is good but your tone is not engaging, at times, mechanical. Pronunciation and grammar are usually correct. Mistakes do not impede meaning. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical. Well done!
Ms. Hewitt