Hi Sima,
Your mark: A-
Excellent choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume and sound effects are used effectively to enhance the engagement of the audience. Tone and pace are used to engage the audience consistently throughout the project. Pronunciation and grammar are 80% correct. You did not consistently use punctuation properly such as to signal dialogue when narrating the story effectively. The plot is well developed and transitions are smooth and logical. Well done! Careful when you pick the color for your font, it was hard to read at times.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Sima,
Your mark: A-
Excellent choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume and sound effects are used effectively to enhance the engagement of the audience. Tone and pace are used to engage the audience consistently throughout the project. Pronunciation and grammar are 80% correct. You did not consistently use punctuation properly such as to signal dialogue when narrating the story effectively. The plot is well developed and transitions are smooth and logical. Well done! Careful when you pick the color for your font, it was hard to read at times.
Ms. Hewitt