Hi Amirali,
Your mark: C
You provide images however, the images weakly match the plot development. Volume and music are used to enhance the storytelling. Tone and pace are satisfactory. Pronunciation or/and grammar impede meaning detracting from the storytelling. The plot is developed and easy to follow, although the ending seems abrupt.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Amirali,
Your mark: C
You provide images however, the images weakly match the plot development. Volume and music are used to enhance the storytelling. Tone and pace are satisfactory. Pronunciation or/and grammar impede meaning detracting from the storytelling. The plot is developed and easy to follow, although the ending seems abrupt.
Ms. Hewitt