2 thoughts on “About Me

  1. Hi Amirali,

    You’ve got a good start, but you have not earned a passing grade for the About Me assignment. You could improve by doing the following:
    – You need paragraphs for each aspect. Five or six sentences per paragraph instead of one or two.
    – You didn’t embed your video (instructions on the assignment page).
    – You didn’t create a clickable hyperlink to your favourite website.
    – You didn’t explain your favourite quote, and why it’s meaningful to you.
    Your Mark – 2/5 Please feel free to email me if you make changes and want the page marked again. If you need help you can come see me in room 213 at flex.

    Ms. Hewitt

  2. Hi Amirali,

    You have added more information to your page which is better. Your video is still not embedded properly. The explanations for the website, quote, and video are still very brief. You have also uploaded three versions on the same page. Very confusing!
    Your new mark is 3/5
    Ms. Hewitt

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