I chose to use Alai’s Perspective, Enders best friend to tell the story.
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I chose to use Alai’s Perspective, Enders best friend to tell the story.
Hi Arianna,
Your mark: B-
Ideas and concepts are usually clearly explained and understood. Landscape, and dialogue are usually well-chosen to enhance the scene. You are often missing captions that would allow for transitions between places/events, resulting in abrupt shifts. The main characters are identified, and their actions and dialogue are usually well-matched.
You did not provide feedback to a classmate. Your mark is 0/4.