Doesn’t really matter+it doesn’t matter

Today has finally got end’d

Dull day was lastly picked up by night

Emotion based on you will be straight ceased

A thing relates to you should be uptight

Anything else in word to you can say

I know this is thy insincere concern

Unreal information thou convey

There has no chance for me to do U-turn

I got all the control of will in hand

None probability to cut my will

The blinder won’t get blinded on my mind

Until one day I will rise up from hell

There is no fluctuation in my heart

For now, it does not matter over me

One thought on “Doesn’t really matter+it doesn’t matter

  1. Your mark: 2.5/4
    Your sonnet does a satisfactory job of conveying the meaning while using the correct number of lines. The rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG is correct for two of the four stanzas. You did not include the original lyrics.

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