Today has finally got end’d
Dull day was lastly picked up by night
Emotion based on you will be straight ceased
A thing relates to you should be uptight
Anything else in word to you can say
I know this is thy insincere concern
Unreal information thou convey
There has no chance for me to do U-turn
I got all the control of will in hand
None probability to cut my will
The blinder won’t get blinded on my mind
Until one day I will rise up from hell
There is no fluctuation in my heart
For now, it does not matter over me
Your mark: 2.5/4
Your sonnet does a satisfactory job of conveying the meaning while using the correct number of lines. The rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG is correct for two of the four stanzas. You did not include the original lyrics.