Hi Arshia,
Your mark: C-
• Meets most of the criteria set out in the instructions although the Works Cited was formatted incorrectly. Missing Significant events section.
• Can be understood and followed, occasionally difficult to follow and there are a lot of errors that impede meaning.
• Evidence of some planning and organization
• Format needs attention, illustrations are placed at the end and seem to be a last minute addition, doesn’t fit properly to engage the audience.
Hi Arshia,
Your mark: C-
• Meets most of the criteria set out in the instructions although the Works Cited was formatted incorrectly. Missing Significant events section.
• Can be understood and followed, occasionally difficult to follow and there are a lot of errors that impede meaning.
• Evidence of some planning and organization
• Format needs attention, illustrations are placed at the end and seem to be a last minute addition, doesn’t fit properly to engage the audience.