Words can’t describe you
Your eyes blue as the ocean
Your lips red as a pile of rose
You’re always on my side like a shepherd and his dog
When I’m not with you I feel like a Christmas night without eggnog
like a dry log in a rainy forest
A book without words
You’re smart like an owl
Sneaky like a fox
And like a box,
Full of surprises
Your mark: 2.5/4
• You have created a title that has the theme and the comparison is apparent
• Your poem has some rhythm
• You have used poetic devices effectively, word choice conveys a believable tone to the audience
• Punctuation and grammar are correct for the most part, a few errors