Reflection:
The poem I wrote is about environment. I met the criteria by using smile, metaphor, personification and alliteration in my poem. I can generate new ideas, build upon or combine ideas of others.
In this poem, I thought of how to make each line rhyme, this made it easier for the reader to read
In addition, I gained more knowledge by researching good examples online for further evidence
I always ask my peers for help when I have troubles on writing or thinking the poem. ( this has been always a wonderful resource, if you are having some problem with the project)
Overall: I will give myself a 8/10
Ways I can improve:
I think I can improve on my word choice used in this poem, some of them are a bit simple. Using those fancy words may always attract the reader more!
Good work on your poem Eason. You need to add more to your reflection, however, try to talk about how you had to think creatively in order to add the simile, metaphor and other devices as well as write a poem that matched the picture. Add more to this and let me know so that I can reassess it. 3.5