Category: English 9

English Poem

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Reflection:

The poem I wrote is about environment. I met the criteria by using smile, metaphor, personification and alliteration in my poem. I can generate new ideas, build upon or combine ideas of others.

In this poem, I thought of how to make each line rhyme, this made it easier for the reader to read

In addition, I gained more knowledge by researching good examples online for further evidence

I always ask my peers for help when I have troubles on writing or thinking the poem. ( this has been always a wonderful resource, if you are having some problem with the project)

 

Overall: I will give myself a 8/10

Ways I can improve:

I think I can improve on my word choice used in this poem, some of them are a bit simple. Using those fancy words may always attract the reader more!

Merchant of Venice Tableau

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Pictures:

Reflection:

For this Project ( Merchant of Venice Tableau)

I think I did pretty well on this project. I took leadership role by helping others and communicating effectively. All of our group members participated and we really did put effort to this project.Firstly, we took the picture by choosing a good background. Then we improved the images by using Photoshop. Lastly, we submitted the pictures.
Through this project, I learned about several aspects of collaboration that need to be in place in order for a group to smoothly and successfully reach their goal.
Overall, I will give myself a 8.5/10

Ways I can Improve:
I can work on the pictures on my own time as well to make it look better. It’s not the worst, but we can make it better

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