English Poem

Reflection:

The poem I wrote is about environment. I met the criteria by using smile, metaphor, personification and alliteration in my poem. I can generate new ideas, build upon or combine ideas of others.

In this poem, I thought of how to make each line rhyme, this made it easier for the reader to read

In addition, I gained more knowledge by researching good examples online for further evidence

I always ask my peers for help when I have troubles on writing or thinking the poem. ( this has been always a wonderful resource, if you are having some problem with the project)

 

Overall: I will give myself a 8/10

Ways I can improve:

I think I can improve on my word choice used in this poem, some of them are a bit simple. Using those fancy words may always attract the reader more!