My name is Elle Lloyd. I am in grade 9 my first year of high school. I have a little sister named Ivy, and she is the best little sister you could ask for she is so sweet, caring, and I love her so much she keeps me going must of the time. I have a couple passions in life which are skiing, interior design and the justice system, and I hope that they are in my future career path.
Favourite Quote
My favourite quote would defiantly by “what doesn’t kill you makes you stronger” its something that I live by every day. I even have a little post-it note on my door jam that says it, and I look at it every morning. The reason why its my favourite quote is because it really connects with me on a personal level because I have had a lot of stuff try and knock me down in my four-teen years when the going gets tough, or I feel like giving up I tell me my-self what doesn’t kill me makes me stronger. Every time saying that short saying has got me here, so i keep telling my-self that and one day I hope I won’t have to, but what doesn’t kill me makes me stronger.
Favourite Image
Favourite Website
Favourite Video
My favourite video would be one from the this years Winter Olympics on giant Solomon. Skiing is one of my passions in life the way it makes me feel is incredible when I carve the perfect turn or land the perfect jump there appositely nothing like it in the inter world! It’s my favourite video on YouTube because its something I inspire to be. To be that good and that type of skill level to have that much discipline is so amazing its intimidating.
Elle, you have not earned a passing grade for the About Me assignment. You could improve by doing the following:
– All your paragraphs should contain more information. Five or six sentences per paragraph instead of one or two.
– You didn’t embed your video (instructions on the assignment page).
– You didn’t create a clickable hyperlink to your favourite website.
– You didn’t include your favourite quote, and why it’s meaningful to you.
Your Mark – 1/5
Elle, 4/5 – You have done a good job constructing your page and have integrated media and text quite well. You could earn a better mark by providing more detailed explanations about your video, image, and favorite website.