Hi Emma,
Your mark: B-
Great product choice, your pacing and visuals were effective. I really liked your use of propaganda techniques but you could have used more gimmicks to sell your machine. You had a clear voice with good tone and good background music. Your contact information, product cost, and slogan were missing. Overall, well done.
Hi Emma,
Your mark: B-
Great product choice, your pacing and visuals were effective. I really liked your use of propaganda techniques but you could have used more gimmicks to sell your machine. You had a clear voice with good tone and good background music. Your contact information, product cost, and slogan were missing. Overall, well done.