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  1. Hi Jorge,
    Your mark: B-
    Good choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume is ok but you lacked sound effects to enhance the engagement of the audience. Tone and pace are used to engage the audience throughout the project. Pronunciation and grammar are 70% correct. You have consistently used punctuation and dialogue to retell the story effectively, mistakes do not impede meaning. Well done!
    Ms. Hewitt

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