Hi Kai, You have used some tone and covered the middle and end of the story but the start was abrupt. Most of your images appear to be taken from the movie and the timing does not always fit the event. Ms. Hewitt Reply
Hi Kai,
You have used some tone and covered the middle and end of the story but the start was abrupt. Most of your images appear to be taken from the movie and the timing does not always fit the event.
Ms. Hewitt