Energy like a Hummingbird,
Never losing any energy,
Always buzzing around,
No matter what you do, you’re never unheard.
Covered in crazy colours,
No matter the season,
Always fun and a blast.
Remember, no matter what I say sister, there will never be another
Your mark: 3/4
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• Your poem has a some rhythm
• You have used a few poetic devices effectively, word choice conveys a strong tone to the audience
• Punctuation and grammar are correct