hi, Im Nolan I am 14 years old, here are some things about me. my birthday Is june 11th, I have a older brother who also goes to heritage woods, we live in maple ridge. I have a pet dog named Shane. things I like to do are play hockey, hang out with friends, and ride dirt bikes, I am excited to start gr9 at heritage woods it looks way better than my last school and there is way more freedom here witch is good. i also really like how we get to choose our classes in this school becuas i can take more classes that i am interested in.
my favourite quote is ” it is better to be feared than loved, if you cannot be both.” – Niccolo Machiavelli
this is my favourite picture, i like it because it shows a lot of colour and good scenery.
this is my favourite website, i like cool math games because they helped me learn math.
this is my favourite video
i like this movie because it was funny and it actually made me laugh.
Hi Nolan,
You could improve by doing the following:
– All your paragraphs should contain more information. Five or six sentences per paragraph instead of one or two.
Your Mark – 2.5/5