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Hi Japan,
Your mark: C
You provide good images that match the plot development. Volume does not detract from storytelling. Needed to use sound effects to enhance the storytelling. Tone is used to enhance the storytelling but the pace is sometimes choppy not used effectively. Pronunciation or/and grammar impede meaning detracting from the storytelling.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Japan,
Your mark: C
You provide good images that match the plot development. Volume does not detract from storytelling. Needed to use sound effects to enhance the storytelling. Tone is used to enhance the storytelling but the pace is sometimes choppy not used effectively. Pronunciation or/and grammar impede meaning detracting from the storytelling.
Ms. Hewitt