Your mark: C+
Good choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling, although it seems rushed. Volume is ok, there are some awkward variations at times. You used some sound effects to enhance the engagement of the audience. Tone and pace are sometimes used to engage the audience. Pronunciation was sometimes an issue, the voices seemed muffled and hard to understand. Grammar errors do not impede meaning.
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