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  1. Hi Sahar,
    Your mark: B
    Good choice of images on your storyboard that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume and sound effects are used to enhance the engagement of the audience. Your use of tone and pace are consistent throughout the project but could use more variation to engage the audience. The pace is often too fast.
    Pronunciation and grammar are 70% correct. You have consistently used punctuation and dialogue to retell the story effectively, mistakes do not impede meaning. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical. Well done!
    Ms. Hewitt

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