A good start Shaun though there are areas in which you can improve upon this. Firstly you need to ensure that your citation is correct. You should have a published and accessed date for your citation. Secondly you should look to use full screenshots for your work – it would make this better than just showing the results. Finally look to break up your text a bit more and try to avoid paragraphs that are very long when you are writing your responses. 3.5/5
A good start Shaun though there are areas in which you can improve upon this. Firstly you need to ensure that your citation is correct. You should have a published and accessed date for your citation. Secondly you should look to use full screenshots for your work – it would make this better than just showing the results. Finally look to break up your text a bit more and try to avoid paragraphs that are very long when you are writing your responses. 3.5/5