Hi William,
Your mark: C+
The trailer plot development is typically good, though it needs slightly more detail to explain if this story. Images are original but I agree with Arnold, the camera angle needs to be more consistent, it becomes distracting. The text placement was good and the background sound effects create an engaging atmosphere or tone. The pacing (rhythm and audio) is relatively engaging for the audience. Establishes a premise early but needed to develop it more.
Your peer feedback to Lucas was excellent. It was clear, accurate, and helpful. Your mark: 3/3
Hi William,
Your mark: C+
The trailer plot development is typically good, though it needs slightly more detail to explain if this story. Images are original but I agree with Arnold, the camera angle needs to be more consistent, it becomes distracting. The text placement was good and the background sound effects create an engaging atmosphere or tone. The pacing (rhythm and audio) is relatively engaging for the audience. Establishes a premise early but needed to develop it more.
Your peer feedback to Lucas was excellent. It was clear, accurate, and helpful. Your mark: 3/3