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1. Hi Ellie,
   Your mark: C
   • Meets most of the criteria set out in the instructions. The title page is not your own but rather taken from the publisher.
   • Can be understood and followed, though lacks persuasive/convincing language
   • Shows good evidence of planning and organization although there are awkwardly formatted parts.
   • Clearly presented ideas, includes relevant detail but often the words are cut off at the bottom of most sections.
   • Errors impede meaning at times

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