Hi Jinyi,
You’ve got a good start, but you have not earned a passing grade for the About Me assignment. You could improve by doing the following:
– All of your paragraphs are missing. Five or six sentences per paragraph will be enough.
– You didn’t create a clickable hyperlink to your favourite website.
Your Mark – 2/5 Please feel free to email me a link, if you make changes and want the page marked again. If you need help you can come see me in room 213 at flex.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Jinyi,
You’ve got a good start, but you have not earned a passing grade for the About Me assignment. You could improve by doing the following:
– All of your paragraphs are missing. Five or six sentences per paragraph will be enough.
– You didn’t create a clickable hyperlink to your favourite website.
Your Mark – 2/5 Please feel free to email me a link, if you make changes and want the page marked again. If you need help you can come see me in room 213 at flex.
Ms. Hewitt
Thank you very much for reminding me, I have changed it again now.