Hi LanAnh,
Your mark: B
Good choice of images that usually match the plot development. Volume and page are used to enhance the storytelling. Attempts to use sound effects and tone to enhance the engagement of the audience but it is not as effectively as it could be. Pronunciation and grammar are usually correct. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical. Well done!
Ms. Hewitt
Hi LanAnh,
Your mark: B
Good choice of images that usually match the plot development. Volume and page are used to enhance the storytelling. Attempts to use sound effects and tone to enhance the engagement of the audience but it is not as effectively as it could be. Pronunciation and grammar are usually correct. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical. Well done!
Ms. Hewitt