Hi Maria,
You forgot to post your Advertisement project, due before Spring Break. Please post it here and email me when it is ready to be marked. Please get it done by the end of the week.
Your mark: C-
I liked your product, but this was supposed to be an individual project except for the one group that came at spoke with me about it. The fact that you did this as a “group” and it was only 23 seconds, when most were approximately 1 minute, means that it was missing some details. Your product name made sense; however, you were missing a slogan, and contact or retail information. You did have good background music and I liked the before and after shot, nice propaganda techniques. It would have been better if you slowed down your transitions, I could not read all of the info before it was gone. If you had used more gimmicks to see the product or narrated it with a testimonial it may have been more convincing as well.
Hi Maria,
You forgot to post your Advertisement project, due before Spring Break. Please post it here and email me when it is ready to be marked. Please get it done by the end of the week.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Elsbeth and Maria,
Your mark: C-
I liked your product, but this was supposed to be an individual project except for the one group that came at spoke with me about it. The fact that you did this as a “group” and it was only 23 seconds, when most were approximately 1 minute, means that it was missing some details. Your product name made sense; however, you were missing a slogan, and contact or retail information. You did have good background music and I liked the before and after shot, nice propaganda techniques. It would have been better if you slowed down your transitions, I could not read all of the info before it was gone. If you had used more gimmicks to see the product or narrated it with a testimonial it may have been more convincing as well.