Hi Reign,
Your mark: C-
You provide images but they are images that have been created for the actual story. Volume is good. You do not use sound effects to enhance the storytelling. Tone and pace are not used effectively. The narration sounds mechanical and does not engage the audience. Pronunciation or/and grammar impede meaning detracting from the storytelling. You have not consistently used punctuation and dialogue to retell the story effectively, your retelling is more of a summary of the story.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Reign,
Your mark: C-
You provide images but they are images that have been created for the actual story. Volume is good. You do not use sound effects to enhance the storytelling. Tone and pace are not used effectively. The narration sounds mechanical and does not engage the audience. Pronunciation or/and grammar impede meaning detracting from the storytelling. You have not consistently used punctuation and dialogue to retell the story effectively, your retelling is more of a summary of the story.
Ms. Hewitt