Hi Rylan,
I found this skit to be full of action, humor, and mostly dedication and hard work. I laughed several times during the fights and use of editing with slow motion scenes. The trailer at the beginning was very clever and made it feel like I was in a movie theater about to watch this action packed film. The subtitles and audio was very clear and easy to understand and the use of modern slang made it even more funny to watch. For feedback I would add more music and sound effects for the scenes that are more quiet. I definitely enjoyed this scene and had to watch it twice because of how well done it was. Good Job! Written by Ayden McCormick
Hi Rylan,
Group mark: B+
Excellent use of facial expressions and body language by all of the characters to make the scene believable, easily understood, and engaging. Volume, tone, and pace used by the actors was usually consistent and easily heard throughout the scene. Subtitles were provided when volume was too quiet. Eye contact by all members was excellent. A few props were used to enhance the scene. Digital tools such as background music, subtitles, and sound effects were excellent and creative, enhancing the plot. Script: often used poetic devices and well-chosen dialogue to enhance the setting and plot development. Most of the main points and some minor details were included in the performance. Missed Romeo’s banishment and Lady Capulet’s final plea at the end of the scene.
Hi Rylan,
I found this skit to be full of action, humor, and mostly dedication and hard work. I laughed several times during the fights and use of editing with slow motion scenes. The trailer at the beginning was very clever and made it feel like I was in a movie theater about to watch this action packed film. The subtitles and audio was very clear and easy to understand and the use of modern slang made it even more funny to watch. For feedback I would add more music and sound effects for the scenes that are more quiet. I definitely enjoyed this scene and had to watch it twice because of how well done it was. Good Job! Written by Ayden McCormick
Hi Rylan,
Group mark: B+
Excellent use of facial expressions and body language by all of the characters to make the scene believable, easily understood, and engaging. Volume, tone, and pace used by the actors was usually consistent and easily heard throughout the scene. Subtitles were provided when volume was too quiet. Eye contact by all members was excellent. A few props were used to enhance the scene. Digital tools such as background music, subtitles, and sound effects were excellent and creative, enhancing the plot. Script: often used poetic devices and well-chosen dialogue to enhance the setting and plot development. Most of the main points and some minor details were included in the performance. Missed Romeo’s banishment and Lady Capulet’s final plea at the end of the scene.