Hi Arnold,
Your mark: C+
Ideas and concepts are usually straightforward and easy to follow. Captions, landscape, and dialogue are appropriate for the scene but not consistently engaging. Sometimes there are abrupt shifts/lacking transitions between scenes. The characters are usually believable through their actions and dialogue but sometimes it is a bit difficult to follow which character is involved apart from Ender and Graff. Careful with grammar errors.
Your feedback marks: 3/4
Hi Arnold,
Your mark: C+
Ideas and concepts are usually straightforward and easy to follow. Captions, landscape, and dialogue are appropriate for the scene but not consistently engaging. Sometimes there are abrupt shifts/lacking transitions between scenes. The characters are usually believable through their actions and dialogue but sometimes it is a bit difficult to follow which character is involved apart from Ender and Graff. Careful with grammar errors.
Your feedback marks: 3/4