Different me in different days
Some days I’m violet purple-
With pensiveness and grief
Like one in a group of lavender, plain and no one cares
Other days I’m sunshine yellow,
Conspicuous and full of joy
Ecstasy, ebullience, and exhilaration consisted together
Get ready to be my friend,
Because today I’m yellow
Hi Arnold,
Your mark: 4/5
Poem uses vivid and exact word choices (especially with unique names for colors); sensory details and images create powerful (symbolic) meanings that you connect to. There are a few grammar errors or awkwardly worded points.
Ms. Hewitt