Posted December 3, 2019 by davidb2018 in category English 10
1 thoughts on “Abridged All the Bright Places”
chewitt
Hi David,
You have good sounds effects and the images are well chosen. You could vary your tone and pace more often to enhance the engagement of the audience. You have developed the plot line well.
Hi David,
You have good sounds effects and the images are well chosen. You could vary your tone and pace more often to enhance the engagement of the audience. You have developed the plot line well.
Ms. Hewitt