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  1. Hi Felora,
    Your mark: B+
    Very good choice of images that match the plot development throughout most of the retelling. Volume and sound effects are used often to enhance the engagement of the audience. Tone and pace are used to engage the audience consistently throughout the project. Pronunciation and grammar are 70% correct. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical. The ending seems a bit abrupt but overall, it was well done!
    Ms. Hewitt

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