Hi Mehrad,
Your mark: A-
Excellent choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume and sound effects are used effectively to enhance the engagement of the audience. Tone and pace are used to engage the audience consistently throughout the project. Pronunciation and grammar are 75% correct. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical although there are a few places where the shift is abrupt. Well done!
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Mehrad,
Your mark: A-
Excellent choice of images that match the plot development throughout the retelling. Volume and sound effects are used effectively to enhance the engagement of the audience. Tone and pace are used to engage the audience consistently throughout the project. Pronunciation and grammar are 75% correct. The plot is well developed and transitions are usually smooth and logical although there are a few places where the shift is abrupt. Well done!
Ms. Hewitt