Hi Nicolas,
You have not completed your abridged story. Please work on it and hand it in by the end of winter break. Send me a link to your blog when it is done.
Hi Nico,
Your images are good and you have used tone effectively in places. Your plot needs more development, missing or weak transitions are distracting.
Hi Nicolas,
You have not completed your abridged story. Please work on it and hand it in by the end of winter break. Send me a link to your blog when it is done.
Ms. Hewitt
Hi Nico,
Your images are good and you have used tone effectively in places. Your plot needs more development, missing or weak transitions are distracting.
Ms. Hewitt