I heard that you’re settled down and you’re content now
I heard that your lofty dreams finally came true
Regardless of all the progress, I feel helpless in missing thou
Since the day you left, I’ve been feeling so blue
Old friend, why are you hiding from the light?
It isn’t like you to hold back and hide in the dark
And It is not like you to run from this fight
Come out and see the light in our secret park
I hate to admit that I’m uninvited to your house
And that you’ve perhaps moved on, never remembering
While I sit here still picturing your navy-blue blouse
I want you to know that I’m still here, never forgetting
“Sometimes it hurts in love, but sometimes it lasts instead”
“Sometimes it hurts in love, but sometimes it lasts instead”
Your mark: 3/4
Your sonnet does a good job of conveying the meaning while using the correct number of lines. The rhyme scheme of ABAB CDCD EFEF GG is correct. You did not include the original lyrics.