From reading this comic, it seems to me, that you have covered all the important points in the book, and have made them all tie together, so it all flows well. I like how you narrate actions that are happening throughout the comic. Something you did well, was how you invoked emotion with your characters to make your story more grasping for your audience. For next time, I would go over your spelling and grammar as there are a few mistakes hear and there. For example, you said pore kid, meaning poor kid. Your visuals are good, I like how you used different types of text for what your character is saying or thinking. I also feel that your language is appropriate for the dialogue of this story. All around, I feel that your understanding of the book is good, and it shows when reading your comic.
From reading this comic, it seems to me, that you have covered all the important points in the book, and have made them all tie together, so it all flows well. I like how you narrate actions that are happening throughout the comic. Something you did well, was how you invoked emotion with your characters to make your story more grasping for your audience. For next time, I would go over your spelling and grammar as there are a few mistakes hear and there. For example, you said pore kid, meaning poor kid. Your visuals are good, I like how you used different types of text for what your character is saying or thinking. I also feel that your language is appropriate for the dialogue of this story. All around, I feel that your understanding of the book is good, and it shows when reading your comic.
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