Hi Gavin,
Your mark: 45%
Ideas and concepts are vague or missing. Captions, landscape, and/or dialogue do not reflect the plot development accurately. The actions and dialogue reflect a limited understanding of the characters and it does not mention the character’s names. A clear understanding of the story is not provided often with abrupt shifts or confusing elements.
Hi Gavin,
Your mark: 45%
Ideas and concepts are vague or missing. Captions, landscape, and/or dialogue do not reflect the plot development accurately. The actions and dialogue reflect a limited understanding of the characters and it does not mention the character’s names. A clear understanding of the story is not provided often with abrupt shifts or confusing elements.