Hi Julia,
Your mark: C+
I liked your product and you provided some good selling techniques/gimmicks. Your contact information was missing a number. Your slogan was good but not as engaging as it could have been. Nice background music and your narration was well paced. You did use some propaganda techniques, but they were not as effective as it could have been.
Hi Julia,
Your mark: C+
I liked your product and you provided some good selling techniques/gimmicks. Your contact information was missing a number. Your slogan was good but not as engaging as it could have been. Nice background music and your narration was well paced. You did use some propaganda techniques, but they were not as effective as it could have been.