I really enjoyed your comic! I like how you used Picrew tp design the characters in the book. I Do think the start of the comic was a little bit fast, when I was reading it kind of just went from introductions to a huge disaster. I am also a little bit confused of the main goal of the characters and what they are trying to do. I liked how the terms that someone usually wouldn’t understand if they didn’t read the book, were displayed and explained clearly and in a font colour that was bright. All thee text in this comic is clear and well displayed, it was easy for me to tell which character was talking. I really enjoyed the background pictures. I think the comic stopped a little bit abruptly, I didn’t realize that the comic had ended. Over all the comic was very good! I really liked it.
I really enjoyed your comic! I like how you used Picrew tp design the characters in the book. I Do think the start of the comic was a little bit fast, when I was reading it kind of just went from introductions to a huge disaster. I am also a little bit confused of the main goal of the characters and what they are trying to do. I liked how the terms that someone usually wouldn’t understand if they didn’t read the book, were displayed and explained clearly and in a font colour that was bright. All thee text in this comic is clear and well displayed, it was easy for me to tell which character was talking. I really enjoyed the background pictures. I think the comic stopped a little bit abruptly, I didn’t realize that the comic had ended. Over all the comic was very good! I really liked it.