Hi Tyr,
Your mark: C
• Meets most of the criteria set out in the instructions. The title page is not your own but rather taken from the publisher.
• Can be understood and followed, though lacks persuasive/convincing language
• Shows good evidence of planning and organization although there are awkwardly formatted parts (red square?).
• Clearly presented ideas, includes relevant detail. Proofread carefully in the future, errors impede meaning at times
Hi Tyr,
Your mark: C
• Meets most of the criteria set out in the instructions. The title page is not your own but rather taken from the publisher.
• Can be understood and followed, though lacks persuasive/convincing language
• Shows good evidence of planning and organization although there are awkwardly formatted parts (red square?).
• Clearly presented ideas, includes relevant detail. Proofread carefully in the future, errors impede meaning at times